How to write - and not write...

 
How to write is an endless theme, and no matter how good you get at it, you can always get better. Below, you will find 22 short, elementary rules for what you should and should not do as an (academic) writer. In time, I will fill out my description of each rule with examples, or I may add new rules or merge several rules into one. For now, read them as they stand, and consult other online resources for more detailed advice. Click here to see some good links and references.

Before you continue, please observe Rule 0:
 

Do not plagiarize!
To plagiarize is to copy text from another source without giving a bibliographical reference. Note that it is also considered plagiarism:
 
- If you copy text without reference from a paper or article that you yourself have written.
- If you do not literally copy the text, but "rewrite" it, e.g. by exchanging a word here and there, dividing up sentences differently, changing the word order, etc.
- If you copy text from the Internet without reference (click here for instructions on how to reference internet sources).
 
For more information about plagiarism, click here.
 
Formal rules and formatting Style and actual writing
1. Use a spell checker or dictionary if you don't know how to spell a word. Do not misspell names! It makes a very bad impression. 12. Develop a personal style that is neutral and clear. Avoid mannerisms and superlatives. Write short sentences if you are not 200% certain that you know how to write long sentences correctly and clearly.
2. Mark your paragraphs visibly - with indents or double line spacing. If you use single line spacing without indents, it is often impossible to see where paragraphs begin and end. 13. Write concretely, directly and simply. Use concrete examples to illustrate your points.
3. Use page numbers in your document. (You turn page numbers on in MS Word by clicking: Insert > Page numbers.) 14. Always specify who is saying what in your text: Who is the subject? Avoid passive verbs and impersonal expressions. There is always a subject, and you should always tell us explicitly who the subject is! This is particularly important when you switch between subjects (e.g. when your own argument ends and you start referring to another author's argument). 
4. Use as few footnotes as possible. Nine out of ten times, footnotes should either be included in the main text or deleted. It is not the amount of information you include in your text that makes it good, but the quality of its argument.  15. Divide your text into paragraphs. Let each paragraph treat one topic. Start the  paragraph with a sentence indicating what the topic is and how it connects to the topic of the preceeding paragraph. Conclude the paragraph with a sentence that sums up the topic and points on to the topic of the next paragraph.
5. Use consistent bibliographical standards, also when you use internet sources. 16. Argue through comparison and contrast ("... X is similar to Y in this respect, but different in that..."). When the reader may doubt your meaning, use negation ("I am not saying that..."). 
6. Divide up your text with subtitles. Choose clear and explicit subtitles that give the reader real knowledge about what the titled section is about.  17. If you are uncertain, say so - do not hide behind vagueness. If you make a point, argue it, but critically and realistically. Do not make exaggerated claims. Be nuanced and balanced in your judgements. (But don't be too meek either!)
7. Keep the reader oriented ("as I have just said... as we saw in the previous chapter... I will now go on to discuss a side issue, but we will return to the main topic in the next section..."). 18. Delete unnecessary words, phrases and paragraphs. Don't pretend that you are saying something when in fact you are not. 
8. Connect sections and paragraphs with bridges ("Now that I have discussed X, it is relevant to go on to discuss Y, because X and Y are related in the following way..."). 19. Theories are analytical, but also stylistic, tools. You can play around with them, use them to obtain specific effects, modify and refine them. Just tell us what you're doing - and tell us clearly!
9. Do not repeat yourself without good reason! And if you have good reason, make sure that the reader understands what your reason is.  20. Read your text aloud - and listen to it. It should flow, be musical. If it doesn't sound good, it seldom is good.
10. Do not introduce analytical concepts if you are not going to use them actively in your text. Explain (don't "define") analytical concepts if you decide to use them. 21. Don't write for the teacher - write for a real audience. Never assume that the reader is smarter than you and knows it all! It is your responsibility to explain things. 
11. A quotation should always be framed by introductory and concluding text that integrates it into the argument in your text. This is necessary, because the quotation, in its original context, was part of an argument that is always different than yours. 22. Break the rules - but only if you are very sure that you know what you're doing! 
 
More advice about writing...
 
Dr. Sascha L. Goluboff at the Department of Sociology and Anthropology, Washington and Lee University, has created a short page with some good advice for students:

http://home.wlu.edu/~goluboffs/grammar_tips.html

Other good writing manuals may be found at:

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/index2.html
(A very comprehensive manual of academic writing.)

www.mit.edu/afs/athena.mit.edu/org/s/ssp/GPF/reference/svepaper.html
(How to write a paper: Short and to the point. - BROKEN LINK, unfortunately)

http://www.associatedcontent.com/article/2768168/how_to_write_a_paper_essay_report_without.html?cat=4
("for those of you who rebel at the idea of a step-by-step approach to writing a paper")

http://www.paulhensel.org/teachpowers.html
(Another short and clear collection of good advice. Excellent!)

If you want to learn more, you should consult a manual of style. Click here for a good reference.
 

More about plagiarism...
 
In academic writing plagiarism is considered a serious offence, since it undermines the entire system of scientific authorship. At most universities, you will flunk (or worse) if you willfully break this rule. More fundamentally, by plagiarizing, you deprive yourself of the opportunity to learn to write in your own voice and think independently.
To avoid plagiarism, put your books away before you start writing. If you need to look something up, do so. But put away the book and close it before you continue.

Internet plagiarism is today rather easy to detect. There are sophisticated commercial services devoted to detecting plagiarism (see http://www.plagiarism.org/), but in most cases it is enough to copy a characteristic sentence from the text in question and paste it into Google in quotes. If the sentence exists on the Internet, you will see it immediately. Often, even a partial sentence will do. Try pasting the following (including the quotation marks) into Google: "After some years in Thailand". A common enough phrase, you might think, but it only gets a few true hits on Google.

Even without such tools, an experienced reader will very often notice plagiarism intuitively, since the copied passage will almost always betray differences in style and phrasing, which may be difficult to describe, but which signal very effectively that a passage is written by a different author.
 

By: Finn Sivert Nielsen

Institut for antropologi, Københavns Universitet
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